考试作文阅卷过程中，老师会对一些“高级”词汇尤为偏爱。当老师一天批阅上千份“内容相同、语言低龄”的作文时，她的痛苦感受可想而知。因此，你一定要避免这些“低级词汇”，让自己的词汇升级、升级再升级！
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形容词
1.?贫穷的：
poor?=?needy?=?impoverished?=?poverty-stricken?
2.?富裕的：
rich?=?wealthy?=?affluent?=?well-to-do?=?well-off?
3.?优秀的：
excellent?=?eminent?=?top?=?outstanding?
4.?积极的，好的：
good?=?conducive?=?beneficial=advantageous?
5.?消极的，不良的：
bad?=?detrimental=?baneful?=undesirable?
6.?明显的：
obvious?=?apparent?=?evident?=manifest?
7.?健康的:?
healthy?=?robust?=?sound?=?wholesome?
8.?惊人的：
surprising?=?amazing?=?extraordinary?=?miraculous?
9.?美丽的：
beautiful?=?attractive?=?gorgeous?=?eye-catching?
10.?有活力的：
energetic?=?dynamic?=?vigorous?=animated?
11.?流行的：?
popular?=?prevailing?=?prevalent=?pervasive?
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动词
1.提高，加强：
improve?=?enhance=?promote?=?strengthen?=?optimize
2.?引起：
cause?=?trigger?=?endanger?
3.?解决：
solve?=resolve?=address?=?tackle?=cope?with?=?deal?with
4.?拆除：
destroy?=?tear?down?=?knock?down?=?eradicate
5.?培养:?
develop?=?cultivate?=?foster?=?nurture?
6.?激发，鼓励：
encourage?=?motivate?=?stimulate?=?spur?
7.?认为：?
think?=?assert=?hold?=?claim?=?argue?
8.?完成：
complete?=?fulfill?=?accomplish=?achieve?
9.?保留：
keep?=?preserve?=?retain?=?hold?
10.?有害于：
destroy?=?impair?=?undermine?=?jeopardize?
11.?减轻:?
ease?=?alleviate?=?relieve?=?lighten
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名词
1.?影响：
influence=?impact?
2.?危险：
danger?=?perils?=hazard?
3.?污染：
pollution?=?contamination
4.?人类：
human?beings=?mankind?=?human?race?
5.?老人：?
old?people=?the?old?=?the?elderly?=?the?aged?=?senior?citizens?
6.?幸福：
happiness?=?cheerfulness?=?well-being?
7.?老师：
teachers?=?instructors?=?educators?=?lecturers?
8.?教育：
education?=?schooling?=?family?parenting?=?upbringing?
9.?青少年：
young?people?=?youngsters?=?youths?=?adolescents?
10.?优点：
advantage?=?merits?=?superiority?=?virtue?
11.?责任：?
responsibility?=?obligation?=?duty?=?liability?
12.?能力：?
ability?=?capacity?=?power?=?skill?
13.?职业：?
job?=?career?=?employment?=?profession?
14.?娱乐：?
enjoyment?=?pastimes?=?recreation=?entertainment?
15.?孩子：?
children?=?offspring?=?descendant=?kid?
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短语
1. 充满了：
be?filled?with?=?be?awash?with?=?be?inundate?with?=?be?saturated?with
2.?努力：
struggle?for?=?aspire?after?=?strive?for?=?spare?no?efforts?for?
3.?从事：?
embark?on?=?tap?=?set?about?=?go?in?for?
4.?在当代:?
in?contemporary?society?=?in?present-day?society=?in?this?day?and?age?
5.?大量的:?
a?host?of?=?a?multitude?of?=?a?vast?number?of?=?a?vast?amount?of?
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高级词汇
individuals,characters,?folks替换people?,persons?
positive,?favorable,?rosy?美好的，promising有希望的，perfect,?pleasurable?,?excellent,?outstanding,?superior替换good?
dreadful,?unfavorable,?poor,?adverse,?ill?有害的替换bad,?如果bad做表语，可以有be?less?impressive替换?
an?army?of,?an?ocean?of,?a?sea?of,?a?multitude?of?,a?host?of,?many,?if?not?most替换many.?
注：用many,?if?not?most?一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
首先,?第一:?initially,?to?begin?with,?to?start?with?
其次,?第二,?第三,?第四……:?furthermore,?moreover,?in?addition,?besides?
最后:?finally,?last?but?not?the?least?
现在目前,?XXXX现象是不可避免且难以否认的?
Currently,?there?is?an?inevitable?and?undeniable?fact?that?……?At?present,?it?is?inevitable?and?undeniable?that?…..?
例句:?Currently,?there?is?an?inevitable?and?undeniable?fact that?computer?is?playing?a?significant?role?in?our?daily?lives......
At?present,?it?is?inevitable?and?undeniable?that?advertisement?has?been?flooding?into?our?daily?lives?......
随着社会科技的发展,人们开始注意到XXXX的重要性?
Along?with?the?advance?of?the?society?science?and?technology,?people?are?attaching?much?importance?to?……?
例句:?Along?with?the?advance?of?the?society,?people?are?attaching?more?and?more?importance?to?the?interview?in?the?job-hunting?......
最近,?XXXXX现象引起了人们的广泛关注?
recently,?the?phenomenon?of?that?……?has?aroused?widepublic?concern?......
例句:?Recently,?the?phenomenon?that?CPI?keeps?increasing?has?aroused?wide?public?concern......
一部分人认为…….,?而另一部分人认为……?
Some?people?argue?that…..,?whereas?others?maintain?that….?
就我个人而言老实说,?我全力支持前者后者?
As?for?me,?I?am?in?high?favor?of?the?former?latter?Personally,?I?side?with?the?former?latter?......
Frankly?speaking/?To?be?frank/?To?be?honest/?Honestly?speaking,?it?is?the?former?latter?that?I?approve?of?......
我认为在我看来,就我看来,我的观点是,?我想….
I?am?convinced?that….?
As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?…..?To?my?point?of?view,?…..?From?where?I?stand?……?
作为一把双刃剑?
as?a?two-bladed?sword,?as?a?double-edged?sword?
因此,?基于以上讨论,?我们很容易得出……的结论?
hence?Consequently,?based?on?the?discussion?above,?it?is?easy?for?us?to?draw?the?conclusion?that…..?
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替换常用词汇的高级词汇
important—significant?
good—stunning,?fabulous,?sensational?
way—approach,?method?
Use—adopt?
but—nevertheless?
understand/know—figure?
so—?consequently,?therefore?out
